/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Anonymous Mon Feb 23 03:43:41 2015 No.1992846 [View]
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Let's break this down.

I'll start:

>Right arm completely blocked at some point by head.

>Coat isn't flowing enough.

>Lack of detail and texture.

>Left foot barely visible to hide details, right foot and leg MIA.

>Light from sword isn't reflected in her body.

>Left shoulder-pad is currently breaking her arm.

>Texture in chain-mail is shit.

But the most important thing is a general lack of form and flow, which is the one thing I don't know how to fix, barring more photography studies.

Care to point anything else, please?

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