/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4794596
1. The placement of the features is mostly right, but the eyes don't match the perspective of the brow ridge and the rest of the face.
2. The jaw has a sharper angle and the ear sits on the lower part of the cranium, not the neck.
3. You're symbol drawing the eyes. Imagine the eyeball inside the eye socket, with the eyelids following the form of the eyeball.
4. The mouth is a symbol too. The lips follow the round form of the jaw. I haven't read Loomis, but Hampton uses the mouth sphere to place the lips.
I've been following you since day 11, and you improved a lot in terms of proportion and feature placement, but you're still symbol drawing. Hampton helped me with drawing faces, so I recommend his book.