/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Can you guys help me out

I'm trying to come up with a good composition for this, is this fine?
I did like a triangle composition (pink) and cut off part of the pics strategically, like the bubble on the top and the mushroom on the right.
I was also thinking of cutting off part of the girl from the frame but i feel ljke her not being cut off adds some contrast.
I also have some issues making her face the bubbles, and not really sure if the legs and perspective is correct, i tried wrapping lines around the form but still it feels off

Any help is appreciated. Thank you