/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2687431
Great to have someone join! I feel this is a very important exercise so would be happy if it became a regular thing.

I took the liberty of doing some drawing over to show you how I would handle some things.

Basically you have the boxes in generally the right spots, but they are not quite fitting into the body the way most people would use them. I did them in red how the boxes would actually fit into the bodies you drew. Basically the corners of the rib cage box go roughly where the ribs turn down. I'm not sure the name for it, but if you suck in your stomach the corners of your ribs that poke out are those points. As for the pelvis the from corners should go with the Anterior Superior Iliac Spine (ASIS). This is a very important landmark, so getting the pelvis box properly is really key in both invention and drawing from reference.

Overall though your figures are quite good, they just have some tiny proportion errors like the torsos are slightly long sometimes or the heads slightly small. I also think it would be a good idea to close off your shapes if you don't plan on drawing the entire limb. It just shows how it sits in space and gives it good form instead of having two flat lines that are ambiguous.

>>2687456
Cheers! I'm not very comfortable with digital lines, so this is part of me trying to attack my weakness. Glad it looks okay.