/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1551890

Construction lines, proportions, 3d forms, planes of the face. Work on those as they will all fix your problems you're having right now. It lacks constructions, features don't line up properly, the shading doesn't comply to the underlying forms. And the eyes are terrible, which you're trying to hide by just putting black around them. Draw those eyelids!
Don't draw the face full frontal, you'll get away with less and have to think about construction more if your rotate it to the side a bit. Less of a risk of things getting flat, without you noticing.
Get yourself some proper reference as well. Also, in case you didn't know what an eye looks like, image related.