/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6947540
pretty good. here are some things that i would do different:

her upper leg is not foreshortened
his leg should be visible under her leg
giving his lower arm more room otherwise it would collide with her lower arm behind the back
his face is inside her skull, pulling it back might be good
index fingers look like they are floating, changing the position helps
using her belt for showing the contour of the belly