/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

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I’d like to clarify that this is mainly my opinion on this particular entry. Not about Manarchy as a team or in general. Normally, I prefer to keep my opinion to myself, specially when it's not really flattering, but I think I owe it to you after so much effort and dedication.

Final Fantasy style presentation 10/10.

Meme Intro: These intros/outros were my least favorite part of all your entries. I think they misrepresent all characters, specially your own, and don’t find them particularly funny, even less so if it includes American juvenile humor - sex, farts and poop, haha. The Stage entries are sacred, why can't you be normal and shitpost anywhere else just like the rest of us?

Yes, I looked like a smug wojak while I was writing the following: Compared to the next two sequences, i.e., the entries themselves, I understand that the substance of this intro is pure meta-narrative, disguised with fictional characters - it shows us once again how intrinsically connected you are to your OCs. And you are willing to show them as petty and immature in order to deliver a message that really belongs to you, the authors. The other characters are just projections that react in an ideal way to your personal expectations. In a few years' time, come back and see if this particular sequence adds anything to the whole entry or if it is necessary at all. If not, you will then be in my place now.

TLDR Narrative wise, unnecessary. As personal development, somewhat necessary.

Akio: The hype is back. Like Chudwick's entry in r1, the time difference allowed this entry to be a direct response to Balkari's entry. I don't think it would have been possible for it to have been so effective a month ago.