/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4526237
you have none of the understanding of form, colors, or line weight of the original, if thats what you mean by "soul"

you need to construct and actually ask yourself what the original artist was thinking when he was drawing
there are some parts like the hair where its entirely obvious you just threw down lines for the outer contour without considering the actual form.

there are other things to crit too, but you'll learn more from trying to identify them yourself

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