/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3064128
you can do 2 things, 1 is to manage your strokes better in a single direction, with minimal or coherant stroke pattern, you kinda do it sometimes but some random strokes thatr shouldn't be there ruin it everytime, best exemple is on the rib cage.

second is smudging your values a bit more, if you still want that hard edge you get on your strokes than I suggest keeping coherence in the direction of the strokes and not mixing random directions together, it makes a mess and isn't very attractive to the eye.