/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4092051
I feel like making the closer person (person 1) smaller kind of made the composition worse as well as not being perspectively accurate, it makes things feel uncomfortably far apart on the canvas, and visually boring. Here's my take on it. I used the big medium small principle roughly to try and fix the composition.

The person on the right(person 2) should have his arms resting on his knees, you'll see that in images of slavs squating.

I also used that same height multiplication technique from last time for the heads specifically.

Honestly it's a pretty difficult scene to pull off, it would require some more perspective knowledge, good feel for the mannequin and to study some slavs, but I think this scene would be easier to set up in 3D because of the dynamic perspective.

Hope any of that was helpful.