/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3644791
you're on the right track. try using a sharper brush-- blending is easier when its one of the last things you're doing. just render as much as you can with a pretty opaque, sharp-edged (not blurry) brush. i find square brushes work the best for laying down swathes of color.
also don't be afraid to go in there real messy with a transformation tool and fix proportions and stuff. a few proportional things i can see is that her hairline might be a little high, and her shoulders not quite wide enough. but these are easy, easy fixes.
remember that when you're fixing something, you shouldn't aim to 100% fix it- just aim to make it better than it was. over time these improvements pile up.

anyone got any general advice for me?