/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1628394
foliage isn't the main problem imo but I do have one bit of advice, the foliage and the snail could be used as a framing device in the foreground and shouldn't be detailed and lightly coloured like the rest of the scene, the viewers eyes aren't going to be lingering there long anyway, make it darker and remove detail, making it darker also reinforces the sense of depth.

Now the main issue is with your composition, I kind of gave you some composition advice before but the main problem is how you lead the viewers eyes around the tree and the snail to the cow and then straight off the page, ideally you should not be leading the viewer's eye away from the page at all, but I assume that the bus going over the bridge should be the focal point am I right? if that is the case you are not even drawing any attention to that at all yet in your composition, the viewer will not focus on it at all, the use the environment more to draw the viewers eyes towards the bus, you may even need to completely move things around or change the perspective but at this point the illustration fails completely at doing it's job so it doesn't matter how much you render it up nicely it will always look vague and confusing, it just looks like a generic countryside scene.

I also just added in white the perspective lines that the other anon mentioned, the legs should be position should be around how I painted them in white but it was very quick so it's not perfect.