/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4975631
Don't critique art style specific things. You have to know the rules to break the rules.
>>4975203
Left foot is curved too much inwards and the way the ankle is sharply bulging out is weird. It should be more subtly curved. The right thigh either should not be curving inward that much, or you need to lower her leg. Her right upper arm also looks like it's barely connecting to her forearm and her peace sign looks like little sausages without joints. I know that wording sounds rude, but it's the only thing I could come up with. Her left arm also looks too skinny in general.
>>4976845
Arm feels too straight, also feel like she should be a bit more curvy since she looks older
>>4976984
I didn't know how to explain this without redlining it, so picrel. I'm not the best artist ever so I wouldn't use my redline as exact guidelines you should follow, but google hands on hips for a general idea