/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2681506

Here you go.

Your line work is good but you could use some work on line weight. Everything above the upper torso looks good. The hands are in good perspective. Everything below the waist though needs more form and shape. The right leg was kind of floating in the air, I don't know if that was your intention but it looked a bit awkward. I think this redline might make the pose more pleasing to the eye, although you can modify it as you wish.

Don't let this faggot right here
>>2681495
discourage you, he's just spouting shitty memes with 0 advice


Oh and good taste in waifus by the way.