/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2550837
This composition seems to lack a focus in my opinion. If you'd like to focus mainly on the knight I suggest moving him closer to the center. If you'd like to focus on the scene as a whole I suggest moving him farther off-center while adding detail to the surrounding elements and background.
The anatomy could use a little work here and there (elbows should reach a little lower), but otherwise its good work, keep at it.

>>2549741
Here's my attempt to fix it, anything else? Im worried im being a bit too aggressive with my color pallet.