/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4501153
I really just wanted to draw the same modell a little bit, but I hope my limited input helps a little nonetheless.

I think your drawing is okay, but you lost some important qualities of the modell.
She has these really nice sharp features that seem like they could cut things like a knife, it's really what makes the image interesting and you flattened them out too much.
When placing the eyes think about the surrounding structure, otherwise you get the problem that they're floating around.
Thinking about the eye, the brow and where they meet the bridge of the nose as a single shape should be enough to get it in the right ballpark.