/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6147084
This is one of those drawings where you correct one problem, see two more that need fixing, and you end up redrawing the entire thing if you aren't careful. Starting from the top:
>Hair
The hair is too far receded on the side. The hair wouldn't work the way as drawn. I've shown where the hair should start on the head, and where the part would be.
>Left hand
Minor correction. Hands are tough.
>Breasts
Breasts are connected to the pectoral muscles, not the ribcage. The breasts are too low on the chest. The left breast is drawn as if it was in profile. The nipples are pointed in opposite directions. Here's a tip: the pecs and the breasts should be parallel with each other. If the left pec is is higher than the right, the corresponding breasts should be the same.
>Right hand
What happened here? It looks like you started drawing it correctly, but flipped it for some reason. Also, you gave yourself a cube to help place the body in space. Use it!
>Butt
The butt is formless like a beanbag chair, and the figure is sinking into it. I know you're trying to make it look soft and cushiony, but it's still attached to the hips. It still has muscle. Again, use the cube to help give it shape.
>Legs
It's mainly the left leg that's the problem. It's disproportionately large. The kneecaps on both legs are likewise tinier than they should be. Make the legs smaller, the kneecaps bigger.

That's it. This is my second time typing all this shit up. Hope it helps!