/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

So I asked for some help in another thread, got some good advice.

However, I'm looking to see if what can be done structurally to improve pic related. The face/head is an obvious aspect that needs fixing. However I want to know on the overall structure that could be worked on.

Mind you its supposed to be a perspective shot.

So I'm attempting a perspective shot and the head is a bit on the creepy side. I'm thinking of changing the head angle a bit so her head is facing slightly more to her right. That way the nose isn't as head on.

I may just have to restructure the face a little and give it more space/size on some of the elements of it. I'm also trying to figure out what I'm going to do with the arms.

Any thoughts?