/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4917333
My take, change jaw shape, increase iris size, eyelashes, remove some of the downsweep on the inner brow that (combined with lines under the eye) read as kind of "worried" at first glance.

Removed lines under the eye as well.

Sharpened the canines, something about the blunter ones was reading as "hobo teeth" to me, I don't know why.

I cleared the "5 o clock shadow" shape on the muzzle early on but it could probably be in the final colored version, so long as it wasn't a dark grey or anything that looks like a 5'o'clock shadow.