/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Hi, I'd like to get some advice on what I should be doing to improve as a whole. I've posted quite a bit here and I think most people here have seen my work and offered feedback, I write those down and try to apply those the next time I draw, but they're mainly for one piece at a time, I'd want to know what I'm lacking overall and should focus in on. Like I can mess up a foot, get told and fix it up later but I want to know my main issues.

I was told to work overall earlier this year on putting more effort into it, think in 3d and show forms, copy artists, improve proportions, study clothes, stop mudding my rendering, draw more, improve my lineart and put more gesture. So I now do silhouettes composition and proper construction, study mel kishida and other artists, studied clothing more, used hard brushes and less blending, drew everyday or when I could, plan my strokes and pushed gesture more.

I think that it helped me, so thanks.
I'd like to know what my main focus should be now though
I think I'm still lacking in clothing so I practice that now and again when I can, as people have said it looks weird, I feel like making it into bigger forms with less folds looks better. I had some trouble with heads and proportions with it being too big or being too small and I'm trying to get that right with little success. I've also been trying to add more head tilts into the drawings, since I also got told that I have too many 3/4 head turns. Finally I'm trying to add more gesture but keep the balance as I get told it's either too stiff or unnatural.

Other than that I'm not too sure where I really have issues in.
I've asked on /beg/ and was just told to not simplify anatomy as much and have darker value. But i'd like to know your thoughts on where I can improve. Thank you.

https://imgur.com/a/uWJUsHY (link in case the image gets deleted)