/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6494012
>>6494019
Why does it have to be for a japanese audience? Are you obsessed with Japan? Why not make it for your own language and culture in mind? Have you actually had an experience like that happen to you? While in Japan?
As a newcomer, you should focus on more plain stories in order to build up your storytelling skills. If this is a plot you really want to tell, then go make a movie. Doesn't matter, I get the feeling you're underestimating storytelling to begin with.