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Anonymous Fri Sep 18 14:30:29 2020 No.4875722 [View]
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>>4875472
Overall it's not bad. I would fix the rim light to get more volume out of the figure. Right now it's pretty even throughout and flattens the form. Try thinking about how it would affect different shapes in 3D space.

The other thing is the ears and the curves on some of the clothing. It feels a bit flat. I think her right ear would point back a bit more at that angle of the head.

Here is how I would do it.

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