/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2267759
Proportions! Her breasts are too small in relationship to her ass, especially knowing the ass is further behind. They look unnatural too, which can be a useful tool in stylization but rather comes off as improper knowledge of anatomy in this case, knowing they are hanging. Overall the relationship in between the pelvis and rib cage makes little sense. Don't forget they are unified by the spine. Hampton said the line of symmetry should always be a C curve when the ribcage and pelvis are facing the same direction. The deltoid on the right is positioned improperly as well, mostly because the muscles surrounding it aren't depicted very well. But really, the spine and the landmarks' relationship to it should be your primary concern. Other than this it's looking pretty good, I love the expression!