/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

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I'm not the ass. But I kinda agree with the other anon to some extent. There are some proportion flaws more so from a lack of proper construction and then moving into sketch phase too quickly. It would be beneficial to observe and study other anime series too besides mobile games fate go. I'm posting an image of serial experiments lain to fully show what a correct proportional image looks like. Compared to yours. I would help redline too for practice but I'd like to get a more comfortable drawing arrangements. Plus I'm busy too. I hope this helps. The more that you study anatomy the more you'll be able to see the errors by yourself by taking a step back from the monitor. Overall the breasts and some of the arms do look appealing even if it's simplified.