/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2680251
I'd like to see the reference photo you used, if so. but in any case, here's a redline. you need to study the skull. you need to draw from life before you go off on your own. the eyes do not typically go that high up in the face area. I tried replicating a copy of your model but you can see that your facial elements are a notch higher up than whats considered a regular face. also, hair has volume, so the forehead looks even smaller. dont add value before you know the complete structure of the head and how it is shown in different angles.

in short, read some loomis, and head over to the beginner's thread.