/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

So I tried to basically re-sketch this. Tried to have less negative space on the faces. I'm wondering if the basic pose in general is working, or do I just toss this? I feel like I'm fighting with it too much.

Also trying to figure out what to do for my noses. I'm a tumblr faggot where they like that ugly nose shit, and unfortunately my weird noses seem to be the thing people like the best about my art (on there) for some reason. And I'm weak and will cave to what gets me more popular.

>>2550297
I basically resketched the whole thing. I still need to work on the faces and hands, but I'm wondering if my basic pose is working at all? Or do I just scrap this.

>>2550434
Sadly. I'm trying to find a way to draw noses. I'm a tumblr faggot where they like that ugly nose shit, and unfortunately my weird noses seem to be the thing people like the best about my art for some reason.