/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3892502
It looks like you’re trying to highlight each individual strand and doing it with pure white on top of that, which gives it that slimy look like >>3892517 mentioned. Notice how in pic related this chick’s hair has blocks of lighter values where the light hits it? Figure out where your light source is and do your highlights in blocks/shapes. Also instead of white, take your base hair color and shift it brighter so your highlights aren’t too bright. Try studying pics of real hair with this in mind to make your drawings more convincing, it’ll get you closer to that sexier hair you want.