/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4801539

>>4567658

>>4253908
>>4253913
Good advice. Other than that /ic/ is good for books and material and you can find some pearls in the mud as long as you have the proper mental filters which are part of a healthy imageboard browsing experience

>>4129346
thanks

>>4036166
>>4036168
thanks

>>3933690
Genuinely a good one, anon.

>>3885848
Seconding

I wouldn't mind reading more. Well done, anon.

>>3749068
nice

>>3715458
This shit is cool my nigga! Albeit it's a bit generic and too saturated for my taste.

>>3701149
thanks!

>>3698770
Looks cool as fuck but the composition is kinda bad. There is no clear focal point: if you used the red less it could have made a good focal point, there is same amount of detail in the foreground as there is in the background so the characters in the foreground lose interest, there are a lot of elements that point away from the page (skeletons arm, dudes gun) and I can't tell what's going on from the thumbnail.

Again cool as fuck and normies would eat this shit up but read a book/watch a lecture on composition if good composition was your goal here. Better than 99.9% of /ic/

>>3667571
Way to utilize the great triangle mouth method.

>>3656191
Never animated before: the door breaking weight looks nice but shouldnt she hit the wall harder after she breaks the door? Also a girl that size probably wouldnt start moving again that fast after hitting a wall so maybe add some anticipation (?) frames

>>3629006
Looking good but I think you need to measure things more carefully, a lot of things are out of place. Also it might be better to work in B&W as a beginner so that color doesn't distract you.

>>3613270
Pretty cool anon but it reads horribly. I had to spend way too much time figuring out what was going on, especially in the bottom half of the piece. You could try separating forms with lineweight to make it more readable.

>>3603084
you realized that you need to get values right before colors

>>3582595
Lookin' good! Keep going, anon.

>>3548064
hella comfy my guy

>>3536832

>>3490266

It's pretty cool OP, keep practicing and you'll be a master in no time!

>>3444210
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>>3417948
i like it! bra, anon!