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>>6374996
i really like your style and especially your lip study. kekd at the finger.
>>6374992
looking good bro
>>6374933
wonder why noone replied, i enjoy sketches that look like they came out of mspaint. also on a side note, the belly button got lost, haha
>>6374959
you could take a look into the suggested resources to improve
>>6374961
10/10
>>6375040
like your style
>>6375090
>cause it isnt evocative of anything
i think it's well-rendered. i would suggest to making them look at each other and think in therms of action/reaction.
>left is inquisitive
>right can react angrily, embarassed, flustered etc
right now the right character is too aloof for my taste
>>6375129
>time to draw cylinders and boxes in perspective
good idea. also i think your pipes came out well, especially if you haven't learned a bit of perspective yet
>>6375612
are you the hands guy from before? you're making progress already.
>>6375644
>tattoo apprentice portfolio
have you tattooed before? i'd ask myself if a picture included in the portfolio is an actual tattoo design or if they are supposed to show of your drawing skills/you as an artist. basically: does the idea on paper translate well on skin. for this picture, i would reconsider small details in the face, because i feel like the nose you chose in this picture will not be such a good choice when it's tattooed on real skin. i think it's too many small lines too close together.
keep in mind i'm still a beg, but this is what i am noticing.
- the right horn is on the side of the head 3 or 4 o'clock, the left horn is on the back 10 or 11 o'clock.
- it looks to me, like the knee in front is broken, the leg should be rotated inwards
- i think the feet are a little too small, even for a stylized choice
the flame is a very cool idea and i think you should play around with making it more edgy, like the tail, so it contrasts with the round eight-ball.

here are my latest drawings, i fucked up a lot, but i like to believe i sovlmaxxed this time too.

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