/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3017964
Hmm. You might need to add some lens effects to make the distortion look convincing. Shade the lens with a very light gray and use a soft eraser to make highlights of white. See the pic. And the hair, too.

And I don't think you defined the sweater curves (if it's even a sweater) alright, but I'm no expert on this myself, so take this attempt at redline only as a guidance. Only you know the exact size of her assets, so you should be able to make a better judgement than anybody.