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i know that its a bit late to critique you on your form, but i feel that its necessary.
first ill say i do like this character design. its interesting.
the pose however is off balance. i feel that almost all the problems are around the waist. its hard to say exactly what i mean, but i think the waist is too thin and this problem is accentuated by the right leg.... like, the way youve drawn it it doesnt look like theres enough room for both thighs for how big the legs are, and how narrow his waist is. a part of what makes this look a little akward is how straight the right leg is up through the torso.
i think that what would help this is if you had more of a curved line from the foot to the torso with the apex at the waist.
for how tall he is, the head is too small as well. i would consider shortening the length of his body... particularly the legs and abdomen.
otherwise. good pic.

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