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I wouldn't know if this is interesting enough but here's my protagonist for the novel i'm currently working on, her name is Olivia Suzuhara

Olivia, a woman without a funeral or memorabilia, transforms into a phantom in a world where lost souls reconstruct bodies from the collective unconscious, becoming Phantoms. Their bodies are made of pieces of the collective unconscious known as "gestalt"

As for Olivia, she's essentially a phantom who's tasked to kill her former lesbian lover, who had left her abruptly for no reason at all. She later then discovers her former lover is actually a phantom herself and she grapples with either having to kill her or not.

Here's my protagonist for the novel i'm currently working on which i'm planning to name “How the dead live”, Olivia Suzuhara

Olivia, a spectral entity trapped in limbo due to a lack of proper funeral rites, is a lost spirit in a world where these lingering lost souls get their bodies reconstructed from the collective unconscious, turning themselves into "Phantoms." The pieces from the collective unconscious their bodies are made of are known as “gestalt" which are like fragments that empower them with unique spells. As phantoms utilize gestalt, their bodies deteriorate, pushing them closer to a final demise.

The phantoms, acting as agents for the gatekeepers of heaven and hell, serving as modern-day reapers, tasked with guiding souls to their ultimate destinations.

As for Olivia, she's essentially a phantom who's tasked to kill her former lesbian lover, who had left her abruptly for no reason at all. She later then discovers her former lover is actually a phantom herself and she grapples with either having to kill her or not.