/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4517624
>>4517624
Needs a fuller range of values - do this and add texture in the places where the composition leads the eye for the image to pop.

Define form through lighting/rendering instead of line as where i've indicated on the sword (also added a bit of texture to the middle bit)

Also you could amp up the areas where light is emitted from the sparks (and have a clear source thereof). I've illustrated this on the face.

overall though the forms are pretty well defined and the underlying drawing pretty good too although I think the chest look far too wide, don't take my changes as anything final to leave in the finished thing as I did them bretty quickly :).

Also make the sword straight.