/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

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>SURFING >>6614922
Louis
I love fern's art but I like the storytelling in Louis' entry. (don't lose your way!)

>SHOOTING >>6612766
Carolyn
This was a hard one, ultimately I like the showcasing of their personalities and how cleverly Carolyn won the duel in the end. Gave both the characters a really good spotlight!

>TENNIS >>6616789
Abby and Anzu
Abbigail was just too fucking funny, I love her characterization here and how it affected poor Anzu.
Sorry Lustless, it was a fun idea you had but I just wish you would've done more with it.

>BILLIARDS >>6613666
Janitor
Fun and effort-posted.
I wish Paulus' entry was easier to follow. I'm sure with some more polishing it'd be much better since the struggle to read it kind of took away from the experience.

>STARCRAFT >>6612793
Soil Repair Unit just had more story-telling and I liked how wholesome it was.

>FIGURE SKATING >>6612804 >>6612798
Leuca and Bernard
I'm a Bellboy simp but that comic + video combo was too fun.

>RACEWALKING >>6612806
Decitron
Silly and fun!

>HUNTING >>6615543
Femboy Elf and Kevin
Fun, wholesome, cute

>TUG OF WAR >>6614922
Akio and Amable
I love bear's entry and found it very wholesome, outtake's artwork was also cute but I have to stand by ball drop.

>TABLE TENNIS >>6612962
Pauline
Had more to offer both in characterization and entertainment even if the pages weren't as finished.

>SUMO >>6612984
Boberon.
Loved dragon lady's half but I wish they had more spotlight.

>SKATEBOARDING >>6613434
Cannon Girl
Wholesome!

>GOLF >>6613703
Merachne
Soul and effort

>CHESSBOXING >>6613902
Penelope
I liked the atmosphere and the story-telling. Very soulful

>PARKOUR >>6614253
Maiden-4
Very creative ending. I like how much it played into both of their characterizations!

>FENCING >>6614922
Prince Alexis
I that Alaisa's entry had color but the dragon wind bro