/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6198857
The biggest thing that stands out to me is the inconsistent lighting. His face is getting these really dark red shadows while no other part of him is shaded like that. So i made the red shadows affect all of him, with a blue ambience to make it a bit less intense on the eyes. Using the colors in your piece in more than one place helps the palette stay more cohesive. The other thing is 3D forms, the snake was wrapped very stiffly around him. Try to think about your subject in a 3D space. Looking at a ref of a snake would go a very long way to make it more believable. Lastly trimming off the excess blotches at the bottom to make it look a bit more finished.