/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>5084059
Well here is where you fucked up.

You've changed the angle of her head because, in the reference image, her hairline is near the top. This is what gives her the fullness to her head size.

Your gal is looking downwards but you haven't moved her chin down to compensate for this head nod. Most of her hair is the top of her head.

I don't know what plumb lines are for, but you need to pay more attention to this sort of thing.

See filename.