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Kai'rae Ahn Eska, Space Vampire/Demon/Elf-Thing, from a comic/worldbuilding project I've been developing.

She is a deserter from the Cosmic Union's infamously brutal 4091st Special Forces "Sword Devil Unit", which is where she gets her tattoos, swords, war paint, hairstyle, and bad attitude from. After her desertion, Kai'rae has joined up with a group of Freebooters who have agreed to protect her from her former comrades in exchange for the use of her considerable skill and viciousness in close combat. Aboard the pirate ship "Fortunate Sun" she fights beside, lives with, and frequently butts heads with several other characters, most notably one Lanny Ceawick, a Human and fellow CU deserter (formerly of the 3788th "Hatchet Man Unit") who it's not like she likes or anything, baka. Kai'rae is proud, quick to anger, and very suspicious by nature, in large part due to her traumatic experiences as a member of the 4091st. However once you get past her prickly exterior, she's actually quite lonely and starved for affection.

Some lewd facts about her species:
>very soft skin
>long neck contains a set of powerful throat muscles which she has excellent control over, and no gag reflex
>fangs extend and retract from her upper jaw, and can inject a venom which has a narcotic (and some claim, aphrodisiac) effect on Humans
>biting and light bloodsucking is a common display of affection
>females outnumber males 3-to-1, are noticably taller on average, and are (normally) much more competitive and sexually aggressive
>at 5'3", Kai'rae is considered tall for her species
>females go into heat for a period of about a week approximately every 3 months, during this time they are extremely horny, their skin becomes highly sensitive, and their breasts may swell and lactate
>nipples normally retract, however they become stiff and pop out when she is aroused
>skin and internal organs are remarkably elastic, which is helpful when mating with Human males, given the size difference