/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4622433
Try breaking arms down more like the simple forms in this next time, it might make posing them easier on you. I'd also recommend that when you're confused by anatomy you don't understand like the shoulder/armpit zone, you look at either Anatomy for Sculptors, or another book "Drawing Girls" (I think this one is in the anime study general's resources but it might be in another general like artbook thread). Also I think the issue with her arms is they're overall too thin and too short for her body size. Use visual measuring to keep your proportions in check.

I like that you put the bats in to move the eye through the composition, though next time you might want to be more careful about the direction you're putting things like that in. Think about if it's going to lead the eye in towards what you want us to focus on, or if it's leading the eye out. The ones at the bottom left lead the eye towards the figure but the ones on the top right lead it out. Play with that stuff more though, it's good shit to be doing.

I like that border print for the dress by the way, cute!

>>3997669
you are getting better anon, try to feel the volumes of things underneath the skin, the things you draw will look a lot more realistic, look at this example

>>3959307
>>3959303, no one woke up and knew how to draw well, you have to produce a lot of bad drawings to get better

>>3710072