/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4473355
The rendering looks great. The left part looks a bit rushed compared to how tight the rendering of the face is. And I think there is too much contrast because of the white background. It would be less harsh with a light gray background which would allow you to use white for highlights. Impressive work anyway.

>>4472114
Awesome work. I agree with the other anon, the sky is too saturated. Overall the values are too similar which makes the image difficult to read. I think it needs more differentiation between light and shade for it to work.

>>4470952
This looks lovely too. There are nice subtleties in the grass. The linework for the background elements is too rushed though. Especially on the trees. It flattens the picture. Maybe draw it more carefully like you did for the characters or try to remove it entirely. Compositionally the girl is slightly too close to the edge of the frame. I feel like it needs more negative space overall.