/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4095705
Given the style you're going for, the eyelashes are too sharp and messy, which creates harsh edges that pop more than they should. Eyelids not only cast a shadow on the eyeball, the eyelashes also have a reflection. This isn't something you necessarily need to paint as individual strands, but you should imply it by larger shapes and some softer edges.

This kind of goes for the rest of the painting. Even if you want a soft result, there still needs to be some cleanly stated, eloquent shapes.