/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2527074
Forgive me if I am wrong, but it looks like you copypasted the top arms down to the middle arms. The composition is off, so is his body. I feel like you like to detail but do not want to touch the piece and reconfigure it after you add the details. He is very lopsided. Try using the liquify tool for quick readjustments. The perspective is strange for the neck, he has spikes coming out of it at wrong angles that do no adhere to the perspective of the piece. The white on the tips do not make sense either. I understand you want the halo and eyes to pop, but use more bolder lights on him as well. The halo should create ambient light around his head from the closeness around it, and downward as well. The tips of his horns should not be the only ones receiving light, and the light received is way too cohesive. It goes from light to gray to dark, which is not how it should. Add a grainy brush of black on his horns to maybe present a bony fleshlike pockets of shadow that the light doesn't hit. Or scribble them in. Be mindful of the light source, chiaroscuro your lights.