/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3655903>>3656019>>3656107>>3656130

Hmm, well I'm definitively happy to see someone help out someone else but I can't agree with some of the lines and suggestion you did.
The most strange are definitively the sock/stocking long black line, makes no sense. Not sure how are you going to create such a wrinkling (transversal) when the forces in place are stretching the fabric up (heel), out(calf muscle) and down (gravity) also it's pretty tight fabric, you might see some wrinkling maybe like that near the ankles but I don't see it doing something like you suggest, as if someone was pushing from the sides.
Heck I even put myself a sock to try it out and the only wrinkling you see is on the tibia-ankle upper side just because you are keeping the foot coming towards you and then is very faint, cascading of small wrinkles on that end. That said I don't have socks as long, so take it with a grain of salt. I just don't see it at the mo.

The inner strap holding the breast (let's say bikini top) definitively won't be flailing around like so, else how the breast are holding shape? Then again maybe they are bouncing, still I would expect that piece to stick the the body and stretch/follow the breast and ribcage since that's how they work in reality, they probably won't have any say on keeping the breast in check with such surface and design. I don't get why they are floating over the body like that. Unless is for appealing exaggerations.

I can only agree with the bottom of the top wrinkling which looks nice but the straps are really rigid and feel as if you were blowing air from below.

The skirt shows the same blowing issue, it should be a mixture of hanging down on the straight down leg and going up/mildly floating from the kicking leg. The underwear has too many dark lines and the form you are suggesting underneath looks oversized. Again maybe it's for exaggerating appeal reasons. But I feel it's just odd.

>>3655903>>3656019>>3656107>>3656130
Hmm, well I'm definitively happy to see someone help out someone else but I can't agree with some of the lines and suggestion you did.
The most strange are definitively the sock/stocking long black line, makes no sense. Not sure how are you going to create such a wrinkling (transversal) when the forces in place are stretching the fabric up (heel), out(calf muscle) and down (gravity) also it's pretty tight fabric, you might see some wrinkling maybe like that near the ankles but I don't see it doing something like you suggest, as if someone was pushing from the sides.
Heck I even put myself a sock to try it out and the only wrinkling you see is on the tibia-ankle upper side just because you are keeping the foot coming towards you and then is very faint, cascading of small wrinkles on that end. That said I don't have socks as long, so take it with a grain of salt. I just don't see it at the mo.

The inner strap holding the breast (let's say bikini top) definitively won't be flailing around like so, else how the breast are holding shape? Then again maybe they are bouncing, still I would expect that piece to stick the the body and stretch/follow the breast and ribcage since that's how they work in reality, they probably won't have any say on keeping the breast in check with such surface and design. I don't get why they are floating over the body like that. Unless is for appealing exaggerations.

I can only agree with the bottom of the top wrinkling which looks nice but the straps are really rigid and feel as if you were blowing air from below.

The skirt shows the same blowing issue, it should be a mixture of hanging down on the straight down leg and going up/mildly floating from the kicking leg. The underwear has too many dark lines and the form you are suggesting underneath looks oversized. Again maybe it's for exaggerating appeal reasons. But I feel it's just odd.

>>3655903>>3656019>>3656107>>3656130
Hmm, well I'm definitively happy to see someone help out someone else but I can't agree with some of the lines and suggestion you did.
The most strange are definitively the sock/stocking long black line, makes no sense. Not sure how are you going to create such a wrinkling (transversal) when the forces in place are stretching the fabric up (heel), out(calf muscle) and down (gravity) also it's pretty tight fabric, you might see some wrinkling maybe like that near the ankles but I don't see it doing something like you suggest, as if someone was pushing from the sides.
Heck I even put myself a sock to try it out and the only wrinkling you see is on the tibia-ankle upper side just because you are keeping the foot coming towards you and then is very faint, cascading of small wrinkles on that end. That said I don't have socks as long, so take it with a grain of salt. I just don't see it at the mo.

The inner strap holding the breast (let's say bikini top) definitively won't be flailing around like so, else how the breast are holding shape? Then again maybe they are bouncing, still I would expect that piece to stick the the body and stretch/follow the breast and ribcage since that's how they work in reality, they probably won't have any say on keeping the breast in check with such surface and design. I don't get why they are floating over the body like that. Unless is for appealing exaggerations.

I can only agree with the bottom of the top wrinkling which looks nice but the straps are really rigid and feel as if you were blowing air from below.

The skirt shows the same blowing issue, it should be a mixture of hanging down on the straight down leg and going up/mildly floating from the kicking leg. The underwear has too many dark lines and the form you are suggesting underneath looks oversized. Again maybe it's for exaggerating appeal reasons. But I feel it's just odd.