/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Sup beg, i am in permabegloom hell. I am amazed at how bad i am at this. I have never felt so hopeless while drawing before. LOOMIS!

>>6884734
>Who even told you that copying this specific book was a good idea?
Loomis is mega famous, recommended even by japs. And you cannot simply ignore his most sold, most recc and most famous book. There are literally info graphics (even out of 4chan sphere) which put fun with pencil on same level of importance / fundies as perspective or observational drawing.
>>6885862
i feel like when drawing chuns massive thighs you should know how thigh is made from 2 big ass muscles and draw it as such instead of 1 coned cylinder
>>6885747
i will just list all perspective rules you broke
>horizon is flat straight line
>horizon is always at eye level
>objects get exponentially smaller the further they are from camera (mountains appear smaller than people right next to you)
>parallel lines converge towards vanishing point placed on horizon
>>6885694
forms are bad, shading is bad, anatomy is very bad. colors are the least of your issues
>>6885583
PYW
>>6885870
i like it 777