/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6204512
i cant go over all of them but generally the arms are very tiny and lack any sort of anatomy. the closer hand looks flat and the middle finger being above the index seems unnatural, its an awkward pose to put your hand in. the back one in this one has a lot of gestural quality though so i like it.
pubic mound is higher than where the gluteus terminates in profile.
pectoral inserts into the upper arm
ribcage issues that i pointed out in picrel
tits dont ALWAYS wrap around the ribcage but you can exaggerate that cause it usually looks more appealing, especially with huge ones like those

not exhaustive at all, im sure theres more that could be said but thats all i have off the top of my head. ofc my redraw isnt perfect and parts could be redesigned to be more appealing/gestural but my goal was making the anatomy more obvious

>>6204514
yes sorry i should have been nicer but a lot of good art here gets ignored because it doesnt have le anime face.