/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2966709
Would've helped if you posted a larger image.

I think the drawing is begging for some saturation in some parts. The yellow could really pop if you push the saturation more.

The front main dudes values seem off. It seems like he should be more harshly lit like everything around him, but hes not.

The composition could really benefit from cropping it at an angle so the horizon line isn't horizontal.

Overall I feel the values and colors are making things a bit muddy. I think the burst of light in the distance could look good a bit more blown out.

I attached a quick mock up of some of the things I mentioned. Just my thoughts - good luck!