/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

how bad is it, bros? haven't tried to draw anything since 8/28 and that was just some skeletons from an anatomy video i was watching
i think this took <10 minutes but i didn't time it
might have picked a bad starting image since i was never good in the first place, but from what i can tell the legs are fucked up and the neck may be a little short, ignoring issues with the sword and scabbard shapes. oh, also the rib cage because i forgot how it's shaped for some reason...
also i definitely don't think this qualifies as gesture but i've never learned gesture, i'm just vaguely afraid of trying to add details
also also sorry for the weird split, one is a youtube video the other is opened from a discord message i sent myself