/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6440823

Ignore the facial features because you're going for something stylistically different than how I draw which is fine. The wrinkles of clothing are directly tied to how the forms underneath are twisting/positioned, so if you're character is lifting their arms above their head and rotating their shoulders, the drapery follows that. Dynamic Wrinkles by Burne Hogarth is a good book for drapery study.

But the most important thing is you should get a book called Fun with a Pencil by Andrew Loomis and burn through that over and over and over. You are stuck in symbol drawing mode where a lot of the elements of your drawings act more like stickers stuck to a 2d surface rather than actually following 3d forms in space. That book helped me a lot and I still go through it every now and then for refreshers. The colors of your art is actually fine, but I would put color theory at the end of the list of what you should be studying.