/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>5120620
/co/ is basically advanced symbol drawing. Anatomy does matter but it may be more important to intuitively "feel" what looks good. Several parts of your drawing are just a bit lumpy and without a decisive direction. Compare your shoulders to Bill Presing's or hernyed's. Mirror one half over the other if you can't see the difference. Yours are asymmetrical but not in a controlled or designed way. What you want is controlled asymmetry, ie opposing or spiraling curves elegantly flowing into each other.

A good way to get a feel for this is to draw simple dynamic shapes and then "draw into" them. Start abstract with shapes that don't look like anything, and then humanize the abstract shapes with a few well placed details.