/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3313106
At this point you're just shitposting, so I will give you a chance to redeem yourself. I'll post what I was working on for you to critique before I had the honor and privilege of posting with someone who is highly skilled, so great that he refuses to post his figures in the presence of us lowly bottom feeders and is only here to have fun by playing with us and I won't hide my weaknesses either.

It was ironically meant to be a profile shot from imagination, would you kindly redline the figure with your approach? After all you are here to provide feedback right?