/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>1901526
I went ahead and had people choose between that one and mine, the original. Funny enough a lot of people agreed with yours, saying that she looked very skinny.

Now, none were manga fans, so they don't matter.

I DO have one question though, why must she follow the anatomical canon if she's a fictional character. What's the issue with her being so skinny when her inspirations are also equally skinny, or even more. Pic related.

>>1531772
I'm not really worried about the anatomy, but mind elaborating? Any criticism is fine really.

>>1531775
I was going for that, it's supposed to be like "she's walking on air" kinda like the shots you see in fighters that are mostly just there to show off the character. Pic related.

Yeah, the coloring is what's bugging me the most. I wanna move away from line art too, what do you recommend?